To include more theory and have more references
To use correct punctuation
To include more theorists within my critical investigation
I need to go into more detail with the points and link with a wider range of media language.
On pages such as 4 i should focus more about media effects and possibly representation.
I need to make more directs to media theorists such as alvarado, perkins and potentially try to add in medhurst and fanon.
For my footnotes i MUST follow the structure.
use more book references
Dont use wiki as much
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